Hey, my name is Amanda and I'm from Philly. I am the oldest out of my two younger brothers. I love animals. I have 2 ferrets, Bernie and Tucker, a pit mix named Royal, two guinea pigs, Rosie and Lola, and finally a fat cat named Sherman. This is my second semester at BU and I am excited for my following years at BU. I am undeclared as of now, but I plan to major in Biology Health Sciences.
I really like the use of pictures and the captions placed below them. They are very aesthetically pleasing especially with the lay out of them being in the four corners.
I really liked that you explained your love for animals. I am also an animal lover as well. The cations on your photos also really helped people know who you were talking about.
It's nice to see someone around here who genuinely appreciates animals as much as I do, especially guinea pigs. Your biography was very short and to the point, just enough to introduce but not enough to make everything about you known. I look forward to hopefully communicating with you more as the semester progresses.
Your audience really liked your use of images, and I appreciate that you labeled them. However, your text is very small, so be sure that you aren't making your reader strain to see what you're saying. Try a bit more text next time.
I really like the use of pictures and the captions placed below them. They are very aesthetically pleasing especially with the lay out of them being in the four corners.
ReplyDeleteI really liked that you explained your love for animals. I am also an animal lover as well. The cations on your photos also really helped people know who you were talking about.
ReplyDeleteIt's nice to see someone around here who genuinely appreciates animals as much as I do, especially guinea pigs. Your biography was very short and to the point, just enough to introduce but not enough to make everything about you known. I look forward to hopefully communicating with you more as the semester progresses.
ReplyDeleteI love ferrets, so I got excited to see that you have two. Animals are great friends.
ReplyDeleteYour audience really liked your use of images, and I appreciate that you labeled them. However, your text is very small, so be sure that you aren't making your reader strain to see what you're saying. Try a bit more text next time.
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